Poetry and poems

Well, I'm gonna bring out my sensitive side (yeah I do have it)
This is a thread for ppl who like poetry and poems.
Please don't post bullshit on here, I beg u cuz it's a pretty personal thread.
U can post your own poems or poetry from others that u like. But it would be nice to know if u wrote it yourself or not.
U can comment on others poetry, but pls keep it polite.
I'll start with one of my own.

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Oh noes sry laura =(.
Mine ima create one now .. or i will try to o.o.

Wish i was there.

Wish i was there to make up with you.
Wish i was there to kiss you.
Wish i was there to make you smile.
Wish i was there to protect you.

KINDA Noobie huh?O.O

UnknownHero wrote:Oh noes sry laura =(.
Mine ima create one now .. or i will try to o.o.

Wish i was there.

Wish i was there to make up with you.
Wish i was there to kiss you.
Wish i was there to make you smile.
Wish i was there to protect you.

KINDA Noobie huh?O.O

Lol, kinda, but it's sweet
This is another one:
Stripped from all make up
No need for fancy clothes
No make-up, or cover ups
With him I don't have to put up a show
He's soft, he's honest he ...
He's loving me for me

Poetry is my forte, and all the following poems I have written. Here goes.

She's the epitome meaning of a goddess, untouched by this world's corrupt ideals, judge mentality, and blindly charged accusations, not only does her soul leak...unsurpassed compassion, it enforces unlimited invigorating vibes, where I've grown to consider it my own personal synthetic ecstasy, eyes that counterbalance the never-ending deaths in my carnage craved world, she's pushed me to the edge of the sea, but never has let go, she leaves me in the hands of a remorseful vessel that I truly am, wandering time and time again, whether she'll absorb me into her being completely...she reigns queen of my entity, she hold the key to making me, and...breaking me...simply put, love is a wonder, calling it an emotion is an insult, where it degrades it's sanctified existence,...it's her weapon against me, and cure for my disease...and mental plague that wreaks havoc on a scale that no person should bear on this magnitude,...but I do, because she's the reason I'll conquer it all, my motivation, inspiration,..and determination takes new form just as a phoenix does, when it dies...she'll keep me alive forever in one way or the other,...she's the key to my immortality....her name is...(confidential name, can't give this out, sorry =p, it's my gfs)

Here's another...all these are pretty much dedicated to my gf. Old but true. (self written)

Rain masked my tears, vibrant skies vanquished my fears, though left me to ache for your presence that I still felt near, I'd turn back to the past, where your place is set in stone, but you're my future, as it shall be shown.

You're so clever, you've put me in these endeavors, don't let me rest in peace any longer, I won't live anymore simply to die another day, it just doesn't end, I feel you in the shadows creeping close by, waiting for me to fall apart completely

If you can't eradicate me now, it'll only make me immortal, incinerate my heart completely, don't taint my soul, but devestate it entirely, this maybe a war for you, and it'll end soon enough, as for me, this is something that will never be over..

Whether it be my fate to wander within your heart, or simply the circumstances that have brought me to become an obediant slave, it means not much that I live or die, only that you hold me tight, and tell me it'll be alright...

Here's some darker...more hateful poetry. (self written)

I fell from your heavens, scorned your God, became cursed for my words, where when I speak they mean nothing, emotions remain expendable, morals and sanity are of the past, now it's live or die, and inevitably return to ash...

Give me something to be afraid of, give me something to complete, clean that grin off your forsaken face, the silence of your eyes, emotionless as shattered blood stained glass, it's too sudden for me to die for you now, just keep me now over the edge

I can no longer walk with you, and give you the same fake smile everytime you wish to add to your own happiness, there is enough crawling under my skin to make me feel like a stranger in my own body

A whore's a whore, something only a weak-hearted man would adore, nothing more, as for a viritious me, and a tainted you, we were simply never meant to be.



IF ANYONE WANTS TO HEAR MORE OF MY SAMPLED WORK, JUST ASK! POETRY OF ANY SORT ISN'T EMO/PATHETIC/GAY, IT'S A FORMAL WAY OF EXPRESSING!

I'm absolutely amazed!
I don't know if I'll put anymore of my poems on this forum cuz they are pathetic compared to yours Oo ...
But seriously, those are SUUCCHHH good poems. I wish to read more of them.

LittleLaura wrote:I'm absolutely amazed!
I don't know if I'll put anymore of my poems on this forum cuz they are pathetic compared to yours Oo ...
But seriously, those are SUUCCHHH good poems. I wish to read more of them.

Thanks, and yours are fine ;o, I'll put up more if requested to do so.

'Life' is a Sexually Transmitted Diesease

~|YuckFoo|~ wrote:'Life' is a Sexually Transmitted Diesease

Thx for your inbreng, but pls keep it serious in here.

Top of my head:(This isnt much of a Poem its probloly like a story ish thing)

Everytime i close my eyes to sleep,i dream of you,walking down the beach hand in hand perfectly fine,the beating in my heart fastens and thats when i know i wake up to a knightmare...not having you..not holding you...kissing you...feeling you,when i awaken from my glorious dream of you it makes me cry,wishing you were here....back to sleep the next day as i lie in my bed..close my eyes...and paradise is back....my love in my heart forever



I can do better but im kinda tired

My turn again already?

Every turn I take, every decision I make, every person I trust, it leads me in a backward motion, where nothing else can be done, except for where I am shunned, my last and only true happiness lies within your hands, so do with it as you please...

Drowning in my own fear, isolated from your presence, I'd say I'm ready to die, it burns me from the inside, every mental tribute leaves the scourge I've laid upon myself to linger, there's nothing left to do, but remain in wait, I won't ever rest...

The reclusiveness that I feel has become appalling, my words gone unheeded, emotions overlooked, existence denied by the one who I deemed as unequivocal, will you discard me just as those before you have done the same?

Molded from the undesirable dark matter that keeps me bridged from the insanity of falling away into the abyss, and drawing too close to the light, you can't breathe life into me, when all you do is blow me away faster and farther as each moment dies

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SEXEH TIME

~|YuckFoo|~ wrote:SEXEH TIME

You're not funny. Piss off this thread. The poems I wrote on here have sentimental value, if you don't acknowledge, then gratz you're a douche, now go elsewhere if you're going to continue.

~|YuckFoo|~ wrote:SEXEH TIME

Please don't post bullshit on here, I beg u cuz it's a pretty personal thread.
U can post your own poems or poetry from others that u like. But it would be nice to know if u wrote it yourself or not.
U can comment on others poetry, but pls keep it polite.

If you need english teacher , i can get you one.

UnknownHero wrote:

~|YuckFoo|~ wrote:SEXEH TIME

Please don't post bullshit on here, I beg u cuz it's a pretty personal thread.
U can post your own poems or poetry from others that u like. But it would be nice to know if u wrote it yourself or not.
U can comment on others poetry, but pls keep it polite.

If you need english teacher , i can get you one.

Why did you comment? Do you have a poem to share? No, you didn't, stop posting crap if it has nothing to do with the topic.

Here's my poem for this post, just so I don't look like a hypocrite.

There's no turning back now, there's no remorse to be felt, whoever walks a path chosen from the heart, blindly hold hands with shadows for comfort, and yet when reaching the end, everything vanishes, just so as it does in death.

YESSS MY TURNNNN

"Life is a drag with noone in it, Wish it would just finish, Compiled construction to my heart is never repaired, Hoping the end is near, I no longer feel for you, i only give this poem to you, as a reminder of what culd be, this is enough for me.

Woot, this is nice peeps. Keep up the good work
And as a reminder, this is no poetry competition, it's just a thread for ppl to share their own/favourite poems.

lol idk o.o

~!Heather!~ wrote:lol idk o.o

I think we have to open our arms to welcome a new spammer

GTFO THIS THREAD. JK, don't spam here though unless it's poetry.

Here goes nothing


Life gets tough,
God made it that way,
So we can be prepared for the worst,
So we can be ready to feel hurt or alone,
So we can be loved,
There are sad and happy moments
But their there to prove a point,
Life is tough so what youre not alone.
Be strong and show the world what your made of,
Be you not what others choose you to be,
Life is tough, So deal with it